Useful Feedback Critique

We was put into groups so we would present and therefore receive useful feedback in return of what we can do to further our summer brief.

I presented my power point about roller coasters, and this is my feedback:

1. Good research into a lot of areas within roller coasters.
Enjoyed the back story on roller coasters and production.
Good timing with the presentation.

2. Brilliant amount of info could have been more indepth but still really good.

3. Broad information.
You covered a lot of good ground you have a lot to explore later.

4. Good understanding of roller coasters. 
Liked the way you researched into many different aspects of design for roller coasters.

5. Broad yet detailed info.
Good use of images however I think the appearance of your power point could use work.

6. Good constant theme.
Use more technical language.
What was the first roller coaster etc...
Good mix of facts & info about design aspects of Alton towers.

7. Some good info.
Possibly look at some other rides around the world for example, the Las Vegas in a sky scraper & the inverted drop roller coaster in Japan.

8. Nicely presented.
Thorough research dives into different areas of the topic.
You made it very interesting and had an obvious enthusiasm.




Now I am going to...


Useful feedback I have highlighted in bold.
Non-useful feedback I have highlighted by underlining.
Average feedback will be highlighted with italics.
 1. Good research into a lot of areas within roller coasters.
Enjoyed the back story on roller coasters and production.
Good timing with the presentation.

2. Brilliant amount of info could have been more indepth but still really good.

3. Broad information.
You covered a lot of good ground you have a lot to explore later.

4. Good understanding of roller coasters. 
Liked the way you researched into many different aspects of design for roller coasters.

5. Broad yet detailed info.
Good use of images however I think the appearance of your power point could use work.

6. Good constant theme.
Use more technical language.
What was the first roller coaster etc...
Good mix of facts & info about design aspects of Alton towers.

7. Some good info.
Possibly look at some other rides around the world for example, the Las Vegas in a sky scraper & the inverted drop roller coaster in Japan.

8. Nicely presented.
Thorough research dives into different areas of the topic.
You made it very interesting and had an obvious enthusiasm.


I am now going to use these three objectives to make my summer brief better...

1. Look at other rides around the world Las Vegas in hotel & also Japan.
2. Further questions what was the first roller coaster? Where did the idea of roller coaster come from?
3. Need to be more indepth.